Thursday, September 29, 2011

You can write great leads to your response letters too!

I (Mrs. Moseley) had to laugh at the introduction to this response letter,

"I walked into the library to find a book, WOW! There is was - giant pandas. One day later...BORING! The book is so lame, I mean seriously, who cares about the colors of giant pandas? I did learn that most giant pandas live in China."
-Emily
Is it okay to not like the book you checked out? Sure
Is it okay to write about the book you didn't like in your response letter? Yes
Is it okay to write a great lead in your response letter - ABSOLUTELY!

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